I Simply Don't Get it-- Zane Duke

Hello friends. It's quite a lovely and freezing cold evening we have, isn't it?

 I must say I enjoyed this poem, but unfortunately I could make no sense of it.

I honestly find this to be very abstract and artistic. The pictures that the author is painting with the words being spoken is beautiful, I can picture these things in my head, but I am unsure as to determine whether these images are creepy, beautiful, or simply uncanny. That's pretty much all that I've got to say about the themes or meanings of the poem. I need some translation assistance before I go on any further in meditation on what I just read.

The use of onomatopoeia is very vivid and striking in the writing, and the purposeful use of slang terms and even purposeful, childlike misspellings such as "goonight" are so pretty and innocent. I know that I am doing a terrible job of being an Honors student at the moment, but the fact of the matter for me is that there are no little hints to the bigger picture (for me). Rather, the entire poem itself is that bigger picture that I can't completely visualize in my mind (perhaps I'm just too clouded), nevertheless I look forward to listening (and only listening) in discussion tomorrow.

peace out, folks.

I commented on Spencer and Josh's blog posts.

Comments

Cade Wood said…
This made me laugh. I relate so much to you in this case! I read and somewhat understood very few things about this poem. Like you said, the pictures painted were vivid and the author's word choices in painting these pictures were superb; however, I have no clue what went down truthfully. I just wrote on something that stuck out to me in my own life, and will highly likely be in the same boat as you tomorrow doing nothing more than listening.
Ezra Kennedy said…
Out of the poem there was only one section that I actually understood and I’m not even sure that I actually understood that one. The imagery is beautiful but when compounded with the words spoken the meaning gets blurred, so I definitely agree with you there!